Objection! How NOT to Start Your Resume

Well begun is half-done. But far too many resumes being with objective statements that can only be described as ... half-baked.

As a professional resume writer, I review and analyze nearly 2,000 resumes each year. And the opening objective is an area where almost everyone could use a little help with their resume.

To show you what I mean, here are three example objectives from actual resumes sent to me for analysis by job seekers just like you. (My comments are in parentheses.)

OBJECTIVE
To obtain a responsible (as opposed to irresponsible?) and challenging (what, you don't like dull work?) position where my education and work experience will have valuable application (like finding a cure for cancer?)

OBJECTIVE
Seeking a position in the sales department with an opportunity for advancement (in effect, you're saying to the employer, "Give me a job where the pay is good ... and keeps getting better.")

OBJECTIVE
Seeking a challenging career with a progressive organization which will utilize my skills, abilities and education in management, product management, operations, purchasing and buying. (Zzzzz. You won't bore anyone into hiring you.)

You can stand out from the crowd if you'll just write your objective from the employer's point of view, instead of your own. Sounds simple, doesn't it?

It is.

All you have to do when writing your objective is make sure it answers this question: "What's in it for me?" That's the question on every employer's mind as he or she reads your resume.

Here's an example objective, to get you started:

OBJECTIVE
Management position in procurement where over 10 years of experience will add value to operations.

Avoid such trite phrases as: "seeking a chance for advancement," or "where my skills will be utilized," or "where I can further my career." I've seen each of these on resumes that were badly hampered as a result.

So, to keep your objective from being objectionable (and torpedoing your job search), put the focus where it belongs -- on the employer and their needs.

Best of luck to you!

-- Kevin Donlin owns and operates Guaranteed Resumes. Kevin has over 11 years of writing and hiring experience, including as a marketing copywriter for such clients as Federal Express, Pillsbury and Northern States Power. Since 1995, he has provided resumes, cover letters and online job-search assistance to clients on five continents. Kevin provides personal, one-on-one resume writing and job-search assistance and he has also authored Resume Secrets Revealed, a do-it-yourself manual that makes writing your own Guaranteed Resume a breeze ... even for someone who's never written a resume before! For more information, please go to http://www.CollegeRecruiter.com/1dayresumes.html